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Monday, May 12, 2008
Jordaan fell down to the swimming pool
6th May at 8.50 am Jordaan our track editor fell into the SPH swimming pool. When Jordaan fell into the SPH swimming pool he was in shook. Jordaan was very sad because he was very shooked. Pak .Lili our teacher for sport. Helped Jordaan to changed his clothes beacause he was very wet. The swimming pool splashed because he fell into the deepest part. He felt shocked about that. The clothes were very wet so Jordaan had to ironing the clothes. The clothes got dry. And he wore the clothes again.
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Please upload a photo about this.
Maybe.... you need pitures abby...
but it is Great.
I guess you need a PICTURE for this article, BUT IT IS STILL GOOD
Hi, Abby
Nice paragraph! It will be better if you
include pictures. Anykind of pictures connected
with the paragraph.
Very good!
Michelle P (grade 5)
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